tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post7398765590722562324..comments2023-03-23T01:21:28.030-07:00Comments on The Black Sphinx: Winterdevrajhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15957519954904901301noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post-13196740762777504112011-03-19T10:20:12.665-07:002011-03-19T10:20:12.665-07:00no you can't blame the liquor,,,,,,,has it eve...no you can't blame the liquor,,,,,,,has it ever occured to you that i might actually be angry about something while writingdevrajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15957519954904901301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post-79868767600702934912011-01-28T05:24:16.331-08:002011-01-28T05:24:16.331-08:00Sorry, but this is the worst I've seen from yo...Sorry, but this is the worst I've seen from you Devraj...Your emotions used to be understated, your anger used to be inchoate and suggestive, you wrote like a pro.<br />This one is the work of some frustrated teenager who couldn't disguise his emotions.<br />Please tell me it wasn't written by THE DEVRAJ JEE.<br /><br />For the record, this is the first time you've made grammatical mistakes, too.<br />and what's with using "whither" instead of "wither".<br /><br />I am terribly disappointed.<br />You are one of the most talented writers around,<br />please please please tell me YOU didn't write this.<br /><br />Or maybe we can blame the liquor....???SEHRAANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17209361312827076999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post-62877423763171140172011-01-22T13:53:43.366-08:002011-01-22T13:53:43.366-08:00lovely ending........but all the posts in this blo...lovely ending........but all the posts in this blog remind me of the opening paragraphs of many useless novels (courtesy sidney sheldon and co). For example, "He glided through the room without making a noise. She continued to pore over her notes. When he was within arm's reach, he........" and so on.<br />but its worth repeating - great great finish to this - kudosad_infinitumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343963025558792583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post-67800827491367348472011-01-08T05:21:01.856-08:002011-01-08T05:21:01.856-08:00getting better dude...
specially d ending!getting better dude...<br />specially d ending!chiraghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17347140641297774307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post-67987475631355151482011-01-08T04:09:40.244-08:002011-01-08T04:09:40.244-08:00this is one of ur most personal posts, where the r...this is one of ur most personal posts, where the reader is kept unaware of the cause, but the effect it has on the protagonist comes out good. " Deal with it" , though the reader is completely unaware in which context it was said ,but it still appears,due to the pain in the narrative as smth quite terrible that no mortal should ever utter. Later when he wants the "SHE" to feel the pain too, that part is great, i totally connect with it.but u could hav spared such hackneyed thngs as "Strange how the very thing that makes your life worth living is also the thing that makes you wish to die", seriously nthn strange about it. The ending couldnt have been better, reminds me of a play i had once read called "the zoo story" . you are gettin better with every post keep up the gud work.Naazharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10038356867993326984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post-25771580674498187572011-01-07T22:55:39.621-08:002011-01-07T22:55:39.621-08:00@bv......u have clearly started to forget what i&#...@bv......u have clearly started to forget what i'm likedevrajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15957519954904901301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post-28391855085848433182011-01-07T22:44:40.555-08:002011-01-07T22:44:40.555-08:00*speechless**speechless*m@dhur@https://www.blogger.com/profile/00819274030493416771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post-68425822595283450252011-01-07T22:25:28.156-08:002011-01-07T22:25:28.156-08:00Well... I love it. Much more than the last one. Al...Well... I love it. Much more than the last one. Although i sincerely hope this post was just a post and not the culmination of some dark nighttime emotion that welled up inside of you.Bedavyasahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03339936600088370226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6445076412900240682.post-4884418829883453222011-01-07T20:52:31.132-08:002011-01-07T20:52:31.132-08:00the girl yu hav talked abt must be 1 lucky girl.
c...the girl yu hav talked abt must be 1 lucky girl.<br />can't the boy freaking tell her how he feels abt her. and how deeply he is in love with him.<br />and frm the next tym ask the boy to wear proper winter clothes.dev majhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06521169264955066457noreply@blogger.com